Pray, submit for mine advisement a more clearlier rendering of thy befuddled scrivenings into a truer tongue of the Elizabethan age.
Hark! In yon first bauble of speech, when 'tis that thou dost spy 'your,' know then that 'tis rendered as 'thy' or 'thine,' for they do signify possession most true.
Couple of typos I noticed:
Page 5 panel 3 "overprotegtiveness"
Page 7 panel 3 "did originally wanted to"
Those aside, the BWEEH is strong with this bloodline. Also, an astute observation by Nikephoros. As expected of the panhypersebastos.
It'd be really nice if MC gave up his whoring ways in the end and settled down with Berga or Cassandra. They both seem like they're a good match for him.