For a novice scanlator working by yourself I say you did a pretty decent job. There's certainly places to improve. You called the MC 2 different versions of the same name, and said the aunt was in her 30s then 40s. There's some kerning missteps too where you've got the last letter of a word...
If you go back and look at the AV DVD then compare it to the Boss, you can see that her and the woman directly to the left of Tamagawa are the same. This leads me to 2 conclusions:
A.) Boss is the same person and doesn't want the data leaked of her uncensored bits which would ruin her rep...
I'm pretty sure the place they're talking about is "Chiba" not "China" wouldn't make sense for a local tourism board to put posters up in another country.
Fr man, like the whole chapter about her ex-bf in HS breaking up with her cause her drunk worthless father broke his arm ect. feels really hollow when it's either just after or just before the multi-chapter fake out cuck of the guy who confessed to her from work.
Idk wtf this series is shooting...
With our full release of Ch.81 I'd like to announce that our group will be devolved. Unfortunately we've found we just can not work together in a professional capacity and as such it's better ti split. Any and all future chapters uploaded will be done solely by myself, this being said updates...
It's really amazing how well this can gut punch you in so relatively few pages when other series use hundreds and can't illicit anything. The worst part of the situation is that no one in the story is "in the right" and its their own stubbornness that drags them down.
I hope someday someone who actually cares will scanlate this series. First it was terribly done on Bato.to with similar messed up page numbers and a horrendous translation. Now it's being done MTL, which I'm not against when done with effort and editing afterwards, along with still having fucked...
Going forward you might want to have another person proofread the chapter as well. There's a lot of grammatical errors throughout the chapter, as well as missing letters or using the wrong tense for the inflection.
It's competent enough you can sus out what everyone is saying but it doesn't...