Recent content by Dalek-Bob

Little sis I can get somewhat, but the brother is quite a dink... And we know it'll be getting worse based on the synopsis.

A reminder that for all his power and maturity, he is a kid... Glad the folks on our side aren't being shifty about this all. (So far...)

Place your bets! Is it: - Summoners have been misrepresented in the culture by evil authority (church, government, "hero") and our MC will discover the lost/secret truth. Or - Summoners are fine, but dad hates him for petty reasons and has been raising him this way to get his jollies. (A...

I normally hate the "crazy lil sister wants brother romantically" schtick, but this gets points for both making her not actual sister & having our lead gal be so much stronger so she isn't a threat. It could still get old fast, but I'm surprisingly good with it for now.

So, is she gonna get off scott-free when this is done? She is a traitor and her actions have led to an invasion and death, but pathos demands a hasty redemption arc and forgiveness for all things in stories lately.

This is pretty standard overall, but like PechWild pointed out - three chapters in and he grasps the truth of his situation and looks to be ready to move forward... If the author actually runs with that, this will stand out for that alone.

I really like our MC, but young miss is making my head hurt. Still, thanks for the bump, and I hope this does get picked up.

I always find these sort of "holy" kingdoms amusing in stories with confirmed deities around. Racist, greedy, violent, and uncaring about the well-being of the citizens - in the name of god(s)... Strikes me as a great way to get annihilated. Bonus for him pulling the classic "sure, they just...

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It's always interesting to see how a story will handle the in-game characters dealing with the MC's diversion from canon... This one seems like a bit of a dick so far.

Ugh... With how little is left, I really could have done without this creep in the cast.

Now that it is complete, I will unleash the full power of the Big Zam Hope of Steel to wipe out the Federation humanity!

I'd love to see https://mangadex.org/title/bcb4fcc0-4154-4d1f-aebd-fdacf444f1c5/mukashi-yuusha-de-ima-wa-hone resume - it had a fun premise and lead.

Thanks for picking this up! I liked the premise, and was bummed to see it stop after the first chapter - so I'm excited to be able to continue it.