Ch 2 was good, however ch.1 was quite a bit better. This chapter felt quite a shorter, which was a tad bit disappointing. And there was a lot less focus on what the mc was doing, you could show more of the process of him making, polishing or just generally producing stuff. The first chapter was...
This was a really great read, loved the mc, he is smart and actually has a process to his creations. The first chapter is huge and it felt like 3 (good thing), I think this story has some amazing potential.