this was great! i thought you did an OK job with the redraw. I encourage you to keep doing it! This was really fun to read, and thankful that you took to the time to share this with us!
the more you call yourself "shitty translator" the more you believe it. believe in yourself and call yourself a "developing translator:" it sounds corporate but theres a reason they rephrase words. Recognize you can do better and accept you aren't at a level you want to be at. be kinder to yourself.
keios is such an emotional wreck dude hes acting on some of the worst logic/emotions and its just fucking him so hard. hes acting on everybodys advice and not what his heart feels so everything he does is halfhearted and fake, before and now. he takes half measures and this just makes bro so...
this is a story about maturing and why i keep reading it. yeah the basic premise is shaky, but its about seeing how things change and how taking control returns results. i love these 3 so much
think its power is limited to what people draw from it. our protagonist is the perfect vessel for him since he tenderizes the vessel to consume more forbidden knowledge, which gives blackie a stronger foothold to act without a vessel. every interaction loosens his chains a little more, which...
so this is basically a “chapter 37.1 is the latest chapter as of translation and i need the raws for earlier chapters” post if im reading p.g 1 correctly understood