p32
I'm back!? should be "You're back!?"
Translation aside, regarding page 1 I'd say that's a weird place to put your group name in a big colorful font, quite confusing.
For the last text box I'm pretty sure it should say events/story that happened after entering/the start of, high school . Instead of after high-school.
The thing I like the most about this chapter is the father immediatly accepting what she means when she says she wants to catch up to his son, he clearly values Mamoru's qualities highly even though many in society would automatically dismiss a jobless person as worthless.
"You fell from the flower pots on the third floor"
That doesn't sound right, I'm pretty sure he just dropped a flower pot accidentally while she was on the street.