Recent content by Eeliejun

Tbh, I really like this. Like the setup and that it feels grounded, what is happening in the story. And like the Romance. Not a main focus, but in my opinion, a little bit of romance makes a story better. The only thing I find strange is the tech progression. Like, sure, a LOT of stuff can...

Hahahaha, a sniper that will keep going? Funny jokes. Lets be honest people like this just do it in a lazy way to earn internet points and then just fly away. I never get why you would do something like this. It has a dedicated team working on it so why even bother?

man poor dragons. Just minding there thing and then insta death to become a dish.

No, I agree with you, and to me it is a bit insane that no one is commenting on it. Like it feels like the story is skiping parts for sure. Like we go from his shop burning to being in a inn. No idea what happend to the slavers and why the gaurds were not called.

You can still have a slice of life manga that has direction you know... Like I personly think this manga went way it to the cooking side rather then have a guy doing that while going about friendship, romance and go one.

People think he will not need to fight Eirich are smoking something strong and want a hit. Like that is for sure the end game of this.

Right? Like I feel the author can't draw old people at all. Like why do they all have a baby face.

Jup last chapter that was said. Strange no one else in the comments noticed that.

Tbh, I still even without so much smut this could been a great story. Like it is a fun smutty read but the tone gets undercut sometimes by the smut in my opinion.

Okay for people saying this has no tone switch from chapter one. Tell me WTF is the page with the girl throwing confetti? Like it cuts the whole tone to make a joke? Sure it could have worked people make morbid jokes but this was not fuck this world I make a morbid joke. Just hahahah funny moment.

Tbh, don't like how the other dude just gets to walk away. Like, yeah, his daughter, but maybe Tug number two was doing it for his little sister that will starve now on the street. It feels cheap to me. Like this dude could be a monster torturing kids and all but gets a free pass now. Ugh...

So, the idea is fresh but not sure about it... It felt really rushed for a chapter 1. Like meeting the wife, the servants, the daughter, and then fixing the tutor. Like this could have been spread out for sure. But yeah this is MTL for sure and personally it can work with a lot of work and heavy...

Man, always great to read this

Look the NSFW version was the better story. Like the biggest problem in this story is that for 99% the MC does not treat the Female MC as a love intrest.

Man, was thinking of commenting how good it was that they had bodyguards and from the few panels that they were doing there jobs. Like the author having them in the background and looking around while the kids were doing their own thing. Was great in my opinion, and then the second part of the...