Man that comment was a good read. I know it didn't exactly add too much on top of what the chapter explored, but it's good to see that other people felt the same way about (almost) trying too hard to ''''destignatise'''' S&M.
Like Yukino said, it's fine to accept the bad experiences and move on...
I've never heard of the term web novel, but I'm guessing from what you described, it means shorter chapters than normal novel? I really like this series so I hope it doesn't get axed.