When aura says "oh my cutie", it seems like a very weird choice, I think "Oh, how adorable" or "How cute" would have made more sense.
Page 21 when she says "good work in completely failing" seems nonsensical.
My japanese is not very good but looking at the dictionary for 落とされて it can mean to...
The translation was fairly poor on this one, was it machine translated?
For example aura was worried not because he was staring at her, but because he was staring at her eyes specifically. (I checked the raws).
I thank you for your efforts regardless.
In the discussion for ch 1 some people told the scanlator to not upscale it, I personally think this was bad advise.
The text is much harder to read, ch 1 was better in that regard.
Thanks for your work translating this.