I love when authors play with the space between panels, like with the candles at the bottom of the flashback. Big props for handling such a dark and tragic "villain" in a pretty tasteful manner.
Chapterly complaint of "I don't mind if you put a credit page at the start, but if you merge it with the first page, people who read on Fit Height have the first page mangled." Your default assumption shouldn't be that the reader is set to Long Strip.
p7, "Shanley". p31, "Sharry". p34, "Shanrii". p37, "Sharly".
The text is also inconsistent about Windblade Hawks, Windcutter Eagles, Windcutting Eagles, and Kazekiri Eagles.
Sure, but there are lots of condiments that date back to the first century AD, even with fairly complex production methods like garum/liquamen. Apicius has a whole section on condiments. Mayonnaise might be a modern invention, but Pliny attests to aioli! Some of these were obviously out of reach...
It wouldn't be an isekai without a re-inventing mayonnaise subplot, as though condiments are some sort of modern invention and people in the past never thought about seasoning their food.