Try to say the translation aloud, or imagine it talking to friend. If it sounds bad, remake the translation, or so they say it's how they do it, still can't phrase two words without mistakes or sounding aarkward. Languages aren't my thing.
Thanks for translation.
One thing, the MC says that snake antivenoms are specific for species. That's not entirely true, in early XXs the Butantan institute developed an antivenom for a genre os snakes. Now it develops antivenoms for families of species, had developed an all round arachnid...
Slavery is a primitive way to procure cheap labour. It also reveals that the economy is based in letting it be without any kind of analysis or grand scale planification. The only way to maintain a system like that is having wars and let some percentage of the population famished son you can get...