Recent content by Greg_no_Gregory

The only way to fully enjoy this kind of series is to treat it as an unintentional comedy: Univas continuing to fail upwards as he either treats the spirits with common decency while asking for help, or does absolutely nothing while all of his cartoonishly evil enemies lose. Dude just wanted to...

Barely?

I get the author wants to show off the protagonist as the #1 strongest, but come the fuck on. Taking out a large number of dangerous ants solo by just smacking them is already an impressive feat. They even point out the potential danger of how they can easily overwhelm someone, so there’s no...

Practically all of these authors need to write a main character as a seemingly average guy who’s secretly an amazing person. It’s always the most simple minded attempts at wish fulfillment that require very little creativity, instead opting for everyone else in the world being inept, cruel, or...

If you need help proofreading and quality checking, send a dm. I can assist if you need it.

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Considering the past 5 chapters had her tied up and being completely oblivious, this is the absolute bare minimum to finally have her do something meaningful for once.

LMAO, I can’t believe it! She just got fired from her job, only to then finally realize this wasn’t even a real job in the first place! XD XD XD Man, I can’t wait for more wacky hijinks in store for our all-power, yet completely naive high school protagonist!

Series had some very nice art, but man was it wasted on some lame writing trying to be more complex than it needed to be. The axe really wasn’t surprising. Too bad they couldn’t have just given all the characters a group shot together casting aside their grudges to have some kind of final...

What happened to chapter 12.2? It’s missing.

You’re only noticing this now? It’s been like this right from the get-go.

It was explained how they were an incubus who later awakened to become the next demon lord. Various demons can and have achieved the title, so it’s not at all farfetched for their father to have slept with an ordinary human.

I 100% believe that this joke of being completely oblivious could work for the series, BUT, it really needed to be done differently. Like they keep sending monsters or other opponents to try and kill her and she keeps overdoing it every time when she believes it’s supposed to be a training...

Other pages the faces look fine, but this last face, which is meant to be the focus, is rough to say the least. If you really can’t see it, idk else what to tell you.

1. Still a dick move on his part. Would be lame to let him off that easy without trying to make up for it. 2. Not to rag on the artist, but what is going on with the face here? It just looks plain off.