instead of doing an awkward translator's note, you could've tried "Want to hit up some tea?" and had the other respond "I'll hit you, punk"
Please, when translating puns, remember that explaining a joke ruins it, if the joke doesn't work in english, make a new joke that does and hits the same...
There's something charming about the art in this, i don't know how to put it. Like it looks like it's bad art, but it's actually good art. Like, the way motion is captured, panel composition, perspective, etc is all done well.