I absolutely love the fact that the story made the effort to have Dineru imagine the our world, within her knowledge. So many stories would just represent modern day society from our eyes, and not from the eyes of someone within that world.
Amazing verisimilitude!
Also looking forward to the...
My guess is that the story got axed the chapter before introducing the "four heroines", and then the story was just rushed to a terrible close afterwards. Essentially this story is horrible, although the concept of calling it horrible is unfair, it's worse than that. I don't think I only speak...