I really like it when the two characters suddenly switched the color of their clothes to black and white and return to their original clothes when the lady confirms the statement. It's so metaphoric.
Thanks for translating, despite all the hardwork you are doing it alone. Some parts are difficult to translate. I totally get how difficult it must be for you since I am a translator myself. At times it's just hard to find the equivalence and get out the right feelings to the original.
Am I the only one thinking that this is actually a bit dry. I don't feel any excitement at all when reading this. Perhaps because I was waiting for it faaar too long to finally see it happening?