Recent content by henrybac0n

Thank you for this, I'll get back to the TL on the 1st and 3rd suggestions. The 2nd was just a miss from me.

Pg 13 bottom-left, there appears to be a blank speech bubble for Chieri?

Typo on page 6, experiment not "exparament"

Pg 2 top left yellow speech bubble, "Just so cute today?", looks like the bubble is missing some CLRD? You can see some white sploches.

Typo on page 7, performance not perfromance.

Thank you for a wonderful release! Some pieces of feedback: SFX should always be done consistently, not necessarily CLRD, but at least TS Otherwise it looks really sloppy and jarring to the reader

Pg 10, and 17, have blank speech bubbles.

Thank you for the release! I would suggest that if doing SFX, do all of them. It's quite jarring for the reader when it's done sporadically.

Thanks for another release! I would suggest not speedrunning chapters, quality > quantity. In regards to SFX, it's an all-or-nothing type of deal. Otherwise, it looks sloppy and jarring to the reader when SFX is done inconsistently.

Typo on page 15, you're not ou're

Typo on page 2, top right. finished, not fininshed

Thank you for another wonderful release! There's a missing SFX CLRD/TL/TS on page 17, top-middle.

I look forward to every chapter of this series, it's so riveting

Thanks for the release! I found a few typos: Pg 2: weather is kind of chilly, not "chilling" Pg 2: raised my mood, not "raise my mood Pg 3: healed, not "heal" Pg 7: apologies, not "apologize" Pg 7: commission, not "commission"

Typo on page 18, should say rookie not "rokie"