Recent content by Huey5923

It's alright. Would not recommend Tons of cliche with minimal effort to expand or provide depth to the plot or characters. They got maybe 1 layer under the surface. Whole story reads pretty flat, no nuance. Plenty of the antagonistic forces are, "just cuz". They're elitist, or greedy, or...

I'm losin' track of who is who. Chp 4: Female knight (light short hair) brainwashed & releasee. (Then cloned and turned into assistant) Chp 8: Old man -> Young woman Chp 9: Princess -> Dragon Chp 12: New female knight (dark hair short hair) possessed Chp 14: Cleric & ???? Chp 17: Female...

I still don't like eye hangin' around folk. Loss of consent/will can and still is very dangerous. Please remember that at the time, a mother being crippled/dying from pregnancy was not uncommon.

This is... Deeply concerning. Would be a shame if she got crippled or died due to a pregnancy she had no say in.

Uh, yeah? Not really. Trailblazer = more of a scout Vanguard = forward/leading offense The terms aren't quite similar enough to be interchangable, but they both describe the character.

In this case it's likely a more literal sense. Trail blazing was a practice of marking swaths of land and clearing vegetation/obstacles for mobility, visibility, and measuring. So, basically: go into dangerous place before others, make it not dangerous.

The blind hammer in a labyrinth of smoke n mirros

Depends on how connected you are. There are some people who could wake up suddenly a double amputee and go, "cool, the buss leaves in 15".

But, does master want to be old again?

Kid named Caution

Genetically speaking, Turboincest

I dislike the implication that there have been other humans in similar situations that were murked/hunted (by humans), or redeemed and murked by demons. I mean, yeah demons are evil but mag feeeeeeeels

Who is the white haired girl. I know the cleric introduced with her, but is she someone from earlier?

So uh, what happens to the bug demon from the demonstration?

Hold up... He's stirrin' up somethin fierce. We got the possession lady and a corrupting cleric. Just let it simmer.