This was a cute story. I'm glad I got to read it in English, but I encourage you to get a better understanding of how to translate manga before uploading anything... If you're duplicating text or are uncertain about what significant portions of dialogue say, it's best not to try translating and...
This was so uncomfortable and bizarre, I hated this one the most of this entire anthology. A woman explicitly thinks, "I wish I were more feminine, like this duchess," and the solution is to make her masculine?? The solution for insecure women is to crossdress? God this entire chapter freaked me...
What on earth was the conclusion with the priest? Is he really forgivable because he took revenge on his family and wanted them to be imprisoned alongside himself? Yes, he protected Rachel in a way, but it feels like that completely incidental and the way that he terrified her and seemed moments...
How absurd. I didn't notice a single flaw that would warrant an internal remark. I was happy to see a quality translation with such consistent updates, and I really appreciate your commitment to this series. It's been excellent.
Compared to so many I've read, the effort put into conveying the...