Huh, no wonder this was cancelled. The flow and pacing between chapter 2 and 3 feels off, and the characters are just annoying and unfunny without having anything interesting to say or do.
What does the AI monster want? It knows everything, tells the MC nothing, and is making all the decisions. Does it just want to keep evolving, or are we supposed to assume that it actually cares about the MC for some reason?
And our protagonist is too dumb, naive, and boring to question...
The problem with the whole "keep the main character in the dark and convince him to do things" premise is that you've basically removed all agency from your protagonist. It's hard for me to get invested in an invincible guy that has zero idea what's going on in his own house and seemingly no...
I honestly don't remember what's going on in this arc at this point. Is any of this going to matter to the overall plot aside from being tangentially related to a larger threat? At this rate we may never know...
Do you think the author plans out more than one chapter at a time? This series feels like stream of conscious style rambling more often than not.
Let's hope this train wreck is almost over so we can finally look away.
Author: I have no idea what to do! Time to throw in another fetish!
I think the art isn't bad and I really appreciate how there's a wide variety of body types, but the writing is pure slop.
Page 17, Koko Kain from an idol group was arrested for illegal drug possession. I definitely wasn't expecting to see Kiryu Coco's alt pop up in this series...
Is that from the raw? Is the author a Kiryukai that's been waiting for a chance to reference Hololive all this time??
I really like this series and I want to know where it goes, but Toudou has become a bit of a Mary Sue in this arc...
She's just going around and solving every problem in record time, often just by talking it out and having a new girl fall for her. And then everyone praises her for being so...