it's clear you don't have a good grasp of at least one of the languages involved in your translation because the way you write things does not make sense, i would suggest not trying to translate into a language you aren't even close to fluent in
i love that it seems equally likely that theyre either 2 edgy guys who like to crossdress and make out or that theyre 2 ojous who like to crossdress and make out fantasy style