The 1st chapter translation was like a rough draft. Someone who's native English really should have helped out, or the translation team should have asked for help.
It's readable, but barely, the poor grammar ruins the story, currently.
There's 2 chapters on syosetu (Which makes me think it failed as a WN there), and there's 57 WN chapters on kakuyomu, but still, the 2023 is correct. It had good follows, but this isn't getting more chapters, it was abandoned. Why make a manga?
That said, I haven't read any of this WN, but I...
I was just thinking he's not "Become stronk, crush everthings, get all womanz" so, that's much better than average already. I kinda dig strong family values MC.
Ooof, same. But it has promise...
But as DemonHide also said, it's "speed-run gamesekai"... and just tons of info dumps.
Not a lot of humor, either. And worst, we haven't seen anything from the lovely dancer, nor does it look to have anything overt to say about our new merchant NPC...
One of my many "Red Flags" for plot writing is:
A female MC who just "goes with the flow," and never attempts to become a driving force for her own destiny
I think this one is going that direction. The double isekai girls where one is "bad" and one is "good" is also a little tired. That...
Slow life alchemist fluffy catgirl who's a monster tamer? An easy add to the follow list.
Let's hope the author keeps it up, so far it's cute, and there's nothing plot breaking about it.
Definitely gives me "300 Years killing slimes" vibes.
The novel spends nearly 20 chapters or 1/3 of a book on acclimation to the setting, MC is stubbornly convinced the world is a dream, and spends all that time in the wilds simply going ham wild on aggressive wildlife and monsters. It's a breath of fresh air that was distilled to 3 pages in the...
I really like reverse portal, eg: Dungeons come to earth. I hope this improves from ch1, because I wasn't impressed. Felt like this is written for very young shonen, which simply doesn't satisfy the creation of a strong base for the plot structure.
I can usually get behind modern knowledge improving magic... but the plot needs to be there, too.
Looks like this one did have a WN that was translated by Darkstar Translations, and another group. I might pre-binge.