Imo the author blew it with this protagonist's character writing. Same thing with 'Serena'. They are both VERY annoying in their own way. The way MC is annoyed by her, basically looking down on her, makes this protagonist extremely unlikable (and ironically, the MC be annoying themself as a...
I really dislike this shit where the reincarnated protagonist-kun keeps referrering themselves as the "this old man", etc., like we should always think this teenager/young adult being an old man inside. Really you should 'move on' from your previous life. Would be better to just write a story...
This world building/character writing is actually pretty ass. Why it isn't properly made clear if this MC still has his powers or knows/can use any of that magic he banters so much about? Considering how easily he got beaten up by those thugs it seems he's weak AF. Also what's up with this...
I hope that he will get together with his family once he has gained more strentgh and influence. Otherwise seeing your family the last time while being only 10y old is just way too sad, and wouldn't be good for any person's mental development.
The mom at the very least (the whole family really...
"You don't want me to call you 'mother'?"
"Then was I adopted? Who is my real mother if it's not you?"
"So you are my actual mother, but wan't me to call you w/ your first name only?"
"Why should I? Are you maybe a bit insane/do you have mental problems?"
"Are you embarrassed of your own...
With all respect this writing seems a bit shit.
Why the fück is this MC whining about not being protagonist, and because he felt being behind some randon kid from some random family, with which your family happens to have bad history? Actually who gives a literal shiet??
I would be way more...
Oh okay. I was confused there in the prior chapter, about this being the MC's class who all died. It seems it's his little sister's (different) class who got summosed 1 month after (?) he disappeared the second time I suppose.
Honestly I don't see the point of showing how his sister and classmates died in the past. That's just sad and depressing, and defeats the purpose if their destiny is already set and what we're seeing is just a memory of the past.
If the author was smart they'd create an angle where MC could...
Imo MC handled that situation just terribly. Did he really have to end the girl's zombie mom right in front of her? If you lack empathy and are a psychopath it might just make sense.
Otherwise I'd imagine that being really traumatizing and mentally scarring event, especially to a teenager. He...
Imo MC asking leniency towards the people who tried to sabotage his career with intent, makes him look pathetic, honestly. It's only by accident that things went as well as they did.
Everyone calling him an "old man", because he's ONLY 38y old is seriously pissing me off. Dunno if it's a translation thing, or japanese thing. Either this is a very young author, or a person with inferity complex about being in their 30's-40's. Seriously that's not old, and everyone calling him...
Why would he give up the bet money? Let's not forget, the other party actually decided on killing the bunny girl because they were losing the bet in the middle of the battle.
There's literally nothing to gain for the MC here for forfeithing the money from the bet.
Just retarded writing. This...