Yeah, I just worded it wrong. I do agree that this author did it fairly well. It’s not shoe horned in, but shows/hints at how it happened right before it happened rather than just have a “WITH THE POWER OF LOVE AND FRIENDSHIP…”
Ye, I just worded my statement wrong. I just meant that Deus ex machina is extremely hard to implement correctly, and that most writers cant do that correctly. However, this writer did it fairly well and i applaud them for doing it right.
Again this was on my and my poor wording.
Ah yes, a deus ex machina (translated as: god from the machine in Latin). One of my least favorite plot device, mainly because of how hard it is to implement it correctly. However, I do think it would work fairly well here if it’s explained well as to why it happened when it did.
Tbh I love the dialect, I find it easy to read because of how similar it is to my folks, so I vote to keep it in.
Now with that outa the way, I’m happy to see that someone finally picked it up after 9 months. It’s back and better than ever, I’m excited to see where everything goes in this story.
The thing about the Video Games are integral to their characters, the 3 other heroes all treated this world like it was a game because it was so similar to a game they played. On top of that the 3 heroes and Naofumi all have personality problems, it’s just that Naofumi never played a game...