I pretty much agree with the last part of this comment.
Of course there's context to this situation but while what happened with part 1 could be excused for certain reasons that Egawa faced back then, what happened with this one has no excuse. Is a clear example of what I call the Egawa...
😂I don't even know myself. The guy is hiperfixated with his political and social ideas and only wanted to write about them by then. It isn't a train wreck since it doesn't had a goal at any moment.
Thank you for the feedback. I had quite a headache translating these two. I think it's probably both things you pointed out, I have probably made some mistakes (that's why I always put the message at the beginning of each chapter, I really need feedback) and also the pace issue. By this time...