thanks for the translation, and same request/advice as the comment before : it'd be better to put an outline on text that has no bubble to make them easier to read. Besides that, taking up redrawing as a first translation is a lot, don't burn out from it :nyoron:
eternal debate between guys and girls. For guys, women's swimsuits are a type of underwear they're ok to be seen in while most girls will say it's another type of clothes so it's ok to be seen even if it covers the same or even less area than normal undies. :huh: