You did a much better job than the first page leads us to expect, no worries. I highly suggest you join the Scanlator School on discord if you want more resources and a large community of fellow learners. They even have a very large selection of fonts in a Google Drive folder if you're...
@Kuroku2 Thank you, we really appreciate it! The official English serialization will be out in about 3 days on Manta Comics for a very reasonable price. We want to respect the author, so unfortunately we chose to drop this. Thank you for your support regardless, though!! ^^
I appreciate the translation and the effort you put into this, but maybe you should find someone to help you proofread? It's sometimes difficult to understand what's going on.