Recent content by mavining

One chapter... pacing already this bad? Ah harem slop, making even stupid people... entertained, wait, that can't be the right word, pacified? That feels better, a bouncing ball can "entertain" the people who read this.

Was wondering how they would set up his usage, and for an intro into a world, with demons, and a tavern, worried it could be boring. First visit into his tavern, nicely done.

super saiyan

Reborn Fantasy World.. written by a baby who dreams of being reborn.

Eminence in Shadow became garbage, but it was definitely a better start than this clone.

Eminence in Shadow, but written by an incompetent fan, probably interested more in the harem aspect of the story rather than making something worth reading.

Bad writing... it's not terrible, art is cute, but sadly, the author isn't smart enough to make this more interesting.

Pacing issues, but cute mother/daughter story.

I see harems, angsty, dribble get more comments and favoritism than this... this is good stuff. Why no real love?

Perfect.

To the people who enjoy this type of fiction, be young, or be dead.

shallow, paced as if the person writing is ADHD.

only genius here is in the title.

Not isekai ✓ Business ✓ Conniving MC ✓ Possible Poor Writing ✓ Not sure what to make of it.

Be careful when Dengling your Dingle while Dangling.