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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 33 - Shounen Manga and Shoujo Manga

    In a way you're validating Yumezora, end the story on a high note, just like she wants to end her life at her happiest because it can only go down from then on 💀 Still, neither Gomi or Yumezora know whether the current happy moment is the happiest one in their lifetime, so it's fine to...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 32 - Recollections of a Murder

    Nah, Yumezora is in a much deeper place than he is, with the history of violence and messed up moral compass she has as result of her sad childhood. Gomi is aware his fetish is extreme but he kept it to himself. When he began to steal Yumezora's bloody pads for his gratification, he did get...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 32 - Recollections of a Murder

    Yumezora being all smile and excited considering their situation is a big damn red flag. Gomi, pls notice it. Please don't just get swept away in being "happy" eloping with your lover to another country, she's not behaving normally and you two are involved in a murder that both of you are...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 31 - No Reasoning

    So to fix Yumezora, Gomi will have to break the cycle of violence. Hard when the husband is bent on harming/killing them. Gomi could stop strangling Moyupi, take Yumezora's hand and just run away. To where? I don't know, the police I suppose, report what happened even if Gomi has to confess what...
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    Kusunoki-san wa Koukou Debut ni Shippai Shite Iru - Ch. 45.1 - Even if I end up all alone, that’s fine, because then, no one else will get hurt (Firs…

    Sure, let Kusunoki keep her fear of falling in love. Don't let MC and FMC become a couple, instead let MC fall in love with someone and then we watch the POV of Kusunoki getting NTR'd, how she let get away a romantic partner due to her fear and it'll be part of her growth. She can just get with...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 28 - Deeper, Darker

    Yumezora's heart is so closed, Gomi's words can't reach her. Not he'd be able to have the right words to say, he doesn't really connect to her in any meaningful way, all they have together is sex. This situation is the first time Gomi gets a glimpse of Yumezora, but he got swept in her pace...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 27 - Pitch-Black Dregs

    Eh, I'm repeating myself, but I don't really like this way of dumping info from an omniscient narrator. Yumezora's past is no longer a mystery to us reader I suppose and now the story is mostly abot whether Gomi can fix her (and grow himself to be a better person, better than what he was in the...
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 26 - Karma

    There was mystery around Yumezora because we didn't know her past, even the other man telling this side of her that Gomi didn't know bring something yet we couldn't be sure if he was telling the truth. Or that Yumezora seemingly confirm it herself but it could be a matter of perspective. Having...
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    Takarakuji de 40-oku Atatta ndakedo Isekai ni Ijuu Suru - Ch. 88

    Valetta is a natural born genius, she keeps having ideas as if she's more familiar with modern world than MC himself lol. If she knows more, she'd basically replace MC. MC would be just an ATM machine to buy stuff from his world.
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    Takarakuji de 40-oku Atatta ndakedo Isekai ni Ijuu Suru - Ch. 87.2

    From chemical weapons to manipulation of the mass, MC really down for every means to win. Also, MC is so involved in lands he has little connection, he just go along trying to make this foreign country from a foreign world win. All for that villager girl :lul:
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    “Okaeri, Papa” - Ch. 31 - Protection

    It feels forced how Touko brought her mom getting pregnant considering she was acting all scared about her stalker, like it came out of nowhere and it's quite the right time. It would make me go "Huh?", and think of her past behaviors that weren't exactly normal
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    Takarakuji de 40-oku Atatta ndakedo Isekai ni Ijuu Suru - Ch. 86.1

    Poison shell? No Geneva convention, chemical attacks are okay to use eh
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    Ori no Naka - Ch. 25 - The Man's Story

    Yeah that makes sense, plus the dude and her probably didn't have time to speak so the dude can only speculate what happened then and he concluded she betrayed him, that she didn't care about him at all. It can be both, she did use the dude, but she didn't want him to die because she involved...
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    Isekai Koushoku Musou Roku ~Isekai Tensei no Chie to Chikara wo, Tada Hitasura ×××× Suru Tame ni Tsukau~ - Ch. 48 - The Female Fan

    "I'll sign here, from your king Sao", are they gonna use this to pin Sao as threat to the Queen? As in Sao is trying to take the crown for himself?
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    Tsumi to Batsu no Spica - Ch. 31 - Spica's Summer Break (2)

    Aku said dramatically that one of the murderer is among them but Spica nonchalantly pointed out it's Anbo like it's obvious truth, all with a smile on her face lol.
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