it feels like post-miura will have all the big impactful moments turn out really good because they were probably explained in more detail to mori, i agree that most of the fluff to get there feels a bit too fast but i felt that that scene with silat and guts was given the proper time to breath...
The dialogue seems to be translated a bit too literally from Japanese which makes it feel very stiff, viz should probably try to localize it a bit more if there is ever a physical release