Recent content by OverZombified

What’d you expect lmao most male mc’s are boring as hell

It’s almost funny how bad this story and the characters are lmao.

I'm Late but I hope you have a good day as well. I do find this story boring but I'm not trying to give informative criticism so I see I'm in the wrong. It has the potential to be a good story yet nothing interesting has happened in my opinion though I'll still read til the end. Again, hope you...

This is honestly so boring to read.

Also, this whole chapter is ass. Keep the sexual/flirty type shit to one character. We ain't be needing a second one, too much to handle or at least in my opinion. This ain't a hentai. (or at least I think so)

Tf that gotta be some fucking magician shit cause ain't no way he be making da Vinci-type shit with one spurt the hell.

glad to see you back 🙏

Yea I know, I stopped reading his stuff because of his last manga But I saw this in the popular stuff so I gave it a read. It has the same vibe as the others so I commented, there’s nothing inherently bad with his type of style but I personally don’t like it. I just don’t understand how people...

One thing I hope the author does in the future is that he has the male mc actually talk and not make her repeat him. He does it in everything he makes and it’s kinda annoying. His story’s has a lot of flaws that I hope he improves on it in the future.

Yeah, I understand. I don't know why the author didn't just make the extra chapters that aren't related to the story AFTER the story ended. It breaking my immersion story-wise isn't a problem for me but I can see why it could do that for others. Now that I think about it more from your...

Well, they've already added many extra chapters to the manga page so I think it'll just be easier for the translators to keep all of them on one page, and if they JUST separate the chapters that are detached from the main story it'll be annoying because like you said some are comedic, some...

Good shit so far.

This is the most boring romance, continuation is not needed.

Self-insertion? Self-insertion is meant for dating sims not story’s. The manga is made to tell a story, a romance. You might be right in some sense but I still think it’s just to make a story about a female MC and not focus on the male MC. You have to know that most of the community are males so...