I don't even know why I even bother going into the comment section. its full of people whining and whining about these stories not matching their impossible standards.
maybe its all the cut-up chapters, but this feels very disorganized and like it never really starts or finishes anything. its like I'm catching glimpses in the middle of something and then it just cuts into something else.
nothing like pulling stuff out of your ass to solve a crisis.
also, with all the time for chatting they had during the breath attack they might as well just strolled out of its path