Thank you so much for picking up one of my all-time favorites!
To continue everyone’s comments on the dialect, I think people who portray Hokkaido as a light southern accent do it best. It gets the point across without being as distracting or hard to read as a more intense approach like you...
I was able to visit Japan recently, and picked up a figurine of my favorite character, Spirits. Not to brag, just saying this is one of my absolute favorite series, so thank you so much for translating it!