I'm reading this for the first time, but:
Norman, please get character development, please get character development, please get character development!
Don't forget, he's so much a god, that god-god is pissed.
This is like a "pizza cutter" (no point, all edge) story, except with the subversion of having no edge. I'm fond of it, because it reminds me of the stories I wrote when I was 10.
I honestly would've expected the author to be much...