I was wondering what had happened with that huge burst! I'm glad to know SmileyGuy wasn't responsible - it seemed like kind of a rude bomb to drop. I'm glad you won't be dropping it! I don't usually comment on chapters, though, so I'm not sure if I'm the target audience you care about, lol.
Did you just machine translate and not proofread this? I could sort of read it, but...whoof. Turns out it loses a lot of charm when they're speaking broken in English and don't sound like actual people.
@alidan the fact that you bring up age of consent is such a huge red flag tbqh. You shouldn't need legal definitions to tell you when someone's "too young." Remember, barely legal = almost illegal.
Consent and power dynamics are complicated topics and you're boiling them down to something...
Wow, I didn't expect the comments section to actually have people calling this gross creepfest like it is. That's super refreshing!
@alidan It was really creepy and uncomfortable in Kobayashi so I can say with confidence that yes, I would be just as bothered by the reverse.
Now this chapter is just gross. Relationships between characters with an age/maturity gap and unaddressed power imbalance creep me out whether they're real or fictional. Go back to the wholesome stuff where there aren't any creepy implications, please.