Even though i read the other version, i will still wait for yours. The things people see that go unnoticed (all the redrawing) is incredibly tough work. I truly do hope you stick with it.
Im rlly happy i get to read this but i do wish this chapter wasnt so fuzzy (but jeremy's face in the end was clear, which confused me more haha)
Thanks for the tr as always!
A lower spf applied more often is better than a high spf put on infrequently. Spf also doesnt necessarily indicate broadband protection and many high spf are made using chemical blockers rather than physical so they can be dangerous for some people. Also spf 30 already blocks 97% of uvb, so...