Okay, if you're going to have both the main characters confess their love for each other, just have them date. The dating doesn't need to go well. There can be plenty of disfunction, conflict, and humor stemming from full blooded siblings dating. So tired of romance authors thinking, "Must end...
Outstanding response. I agree on all obscene media having a right to exist. I agree that censoring is not the answer. I disagree on the shaming though. Shaming should always be an option. People are free to shame me for my opinions as well.
Cultivating critical thinking in children is the...
I'm enjoying the incest story. It's a fun taboo in fiction. My point is to keep it in the realm of fiction, and not approve of it in real life. It should remain a taboo.
Royalty has practiced incest for many generations, and they have genetic disorders as a direct result of doing so. The upper...
Having it be mutual and confirmed in a single chapter is lazy writing. Romance is better when there is some doubt and tension. Easy victories feel cheap and unearned.
Incest in real life, is harmful for multiple reasons. There is genetic damage done to any children born of it. People have a natural aversion and disgust towards incest, for good reason. I suspect it is a form of inherited genetic memory. Our ancestors knew the dangers. Disgust can be a form of...
There is an untranslated dialogue bubble in the lower right corner of the first page. Later on Chiaki says, "Cook me however you like." Was she speaking in really modern slang here? Something to the effect of "Do whatever you like with me."? As far as new slang for younger generations go, I'm...
I went back and checked the chapter out of curiosity. I see that you fixed every single one of the above sentences. You sir, are a scholar and a gentleman. Thank you.
The translation has a few awkward sentences. There are some sentences where the meaning is changed to the exact opposite of the original. And there are also sentences where its hard for the reader to be sure what is being said.
"I've been tasked to locate a fresh, out-standing talent by...
I'm going to need to quickly go through my entire catalogue of stuff in my Plan to Read saved section. Copy all of the names and then find a new website. Are we allowed to criticize Mangadex in the forums, or is that something they hand out bans for? "If we just ban everyone that has opinions we...
I agree with everything you said, except the part about brandishing a weapon. Annette is a young girl. A child. She has no strength. It doesn't matter if she has all the sword techniques, if she doesn't have the strength and stamina to back them up. Most manga get around this by giving the girl...
It's a garbage tier fetish. I would add "ugly bastard" to that as well. Along with guro. There's a lot of vomit tier repulsive shit out there. And don't forget scat. A genre that shouldn't even exist. While young big titty girls and ugly old men is garbage, there are far, far worse things out there.