I'd give it a 4/10 or 3/5.
Art is decent enough.
Whiplash between tone makes the story inconsistent. One moment its trying to give a dense vibe and make the world feel more serious than it actually is, and the next the tension of impact is immediately dulled/released with mediocre humor and a...
Excellent read. A perfect short series, that I'd love to own a hard copy of if it was printed. I think it's perfect right where it's at. Ends well, all the loose ends get tied neatly, and even leaves you with a nice bittersweet taste to wash it all down.
Writing any more to this series would be...
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I wouldn't rate it higher than 6/10. If anything, the whole story would need adjustments and expansion to flesh everything out. Supporting characters would need to be deeper and more relevant to the plot and MC, and the setting would need to pick a clear artistic direction rather than the...