page 5 panel 1: "uh-yes..." alright or sure would sound better here
page 9 last panel: is confusingly worded as a whole
page 10 panel 1: "you're such diligent one" -> "such a diligent one"
page 14 panel 1: crashed out feels out of character
page 19 last panel: "popping out of nowhere" ->...
there are quite a few times when you use a characters name and it reads completely unnaturally. you shouldn't be afraid to use you even if the jp says a name
yeah I meant only the in chapter notes. I don't think the post chapter write-ups are bad at all since they're not in the chapter itself taking my attention off of what's going on (and I really enjoy reading about translators thought processes).
I don't really see much issue with having a large...
its still being tld by /a/
https://cubari.moe/read/gist/cmF3L292ZXJ1bmRlcnRocnVzdC9tYWpvdG9reXVyYXN1L21haW4vTWFqb1RvS3l1cmFzdS5qc29u/
typesetter is unable to typeset atm so the latest few havent been finished yet