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#PenneDidNothingWrong

Very nice, now time to load your guns boy because we got a twat and a beach to put lead between the eyes.

I'd say this point makes it even worse because she's not directly trying, most people including me find this extremely unsatisfying. What I mean by "trying" is showing the mom's POV, like maybe, as she said, she was so damn awkward that her internal monologue when trying to interact with her...

Oh yeah, this is bad. If the roles are reversed where the father is the distant one with a dying mother, we'd get a more vengeful reaction. This? This is just way too forced. In my opinion, this would be written better if this was over a few chapters, add some tid bits that maybe the mother...

I'd recommend this to anyone with an existential crises just to see what happens 🤪

Oddly wholesome with eye candy. Not "holesome" but actually wholesome.

Jokes aside, can't wait for the following chapters :3

... Isn't this just medieval modern day? No father to guide, no mother to be loved by, sees the first woman who gives him attention, turns into a simp.

Wait... he still thinks he's weak? I thought it was an act so that the goddess doesn't get in trouble or some shit? Or am I just imagining a fake scenario? 🤣

What the hell did I just read? 🤣

Lmao, all I saw was "I need more power" and I immediately thought of Vergil from Devil May Cry and was like "is this turning into a Devil May Cry gender bent fantasy?" 🤣

Saaaame, the moment that one soldier started with the "how dare you" crap. I would've attempted to blow a hole in that head to set an example. Maybe even take some of their heads and place them somewhere else in the forest as a diversion tactic. 🤔

rip ;-;

A surprisingly fun read, has that comedic effect similar to Fire Department Chronicles on YouTube.