Thanks! It’s my favorite manga, I think it deserves more views and if my cleaning of the translation makes it easier for people stick with it all the better.
The overarching message of the story how people just want to be remembered and remember their loved ones and how having writing can help...
Most of the changes were small, such as typos, spelling, grammar, punctuation. Occasionally I reworked the whole sentence so it flowed better. So don’t expect anything super new. It was mostly just a clean up of Milky‘s translation