The "gyaru mangaka" and "childhood friend mangaka" each would be good in their own story. But having both in one story like this...
Even though I'm a big fan of self-insert fantasy... this is still too much, it's breaking the immersion...
FUCK OFF, bitch
I don't care about your fucking story. I don't give a fuck about your story at all
"Please treat Ayami-senpai well." Well, FUCK YOU MC-kun. Not getting your care is one of the kindest atonement she could make.
gee~ if only the girl was less of a bitch then I would had cared more...