Have read all of this and it really never goes anywhere past its initial chapter. If you wanted fight scenes where an almost mindless monster pulls off plot armor wins and kills adventurers this is for you?
The monsters victories/survival are caused by (apologies if slightly off, not going back...
A kid used as bait dies cursing the world and becomes a demon, potentially an incredibly powerful one. But even the strongest demon can't enter the city's barrier and attack the cathedral. The fact the villages and towns outside of the city that lack its barrier come under attack only furthers...
Will second a statement about the only flaw is the father still getting off the hook entirely. Honestly I was expecting the father to be redeemed by a reveal that Dimitri had been puppetting him not that nope this guy has always been horrible.
I think the reveal of Norman rejecting the offer to...
Agreed. I feel like this also had a lot of potential if it continued forward.
The peaceful island the former Demon Queen was building, the slow collapse of the humans and demons responsible for her deciding to fake death and relax, the Hero learning how evil everyone around him actually is, etc...
So I think this is doing a decent job of showing that the gods and setting is so fucked up that basically anyone/everyone is doomed from the start which I'm not sure is the intention?
I feel like we are going to get a Victoria ended up trading away her kindness/empathy to save Raoul because the...
I have continued reading this out of bile fascination at this point. It is edgy revenge slop to the highest level. Almost everyone in the entire word is incredibly evil outside of a few victims that lack power or bystanders too pathetic to really amount to anything. It is a setting where for any...
A lot of mangas that have the neglected strong character is gone and things start collapsing plot, but I wasn't expecting this level of consequences from her disappearance. Usually it is the level of people realizing how much they needed the missing person and/or a department/party/etc...
Interesting.
I think locking it to 4 choices is correct vs just having write-in or top comment dictates because it allowed for the story to still be somewhat controlled. The votes would reveal different information about the mandrake girl (either her personality or her history/abilities) but...
I'm not against settings that exist for erotica but I'd like them to make sense?
Like a setting where you have those with higher level/power just using and abusing those below them is fine (okay most of the time its trash, but like at least consistent). A setting where because they die a lot of...
I'm curious if we are going to get the significance of the message he sent Yutia later? He knows it only as a phrase that someone tried and failed to use to befriend her but that it came too late and here it seems to be the impetus for why she starts worshiping him after meeting him. Like the...
Agreed. Ending Maker had something similar to this where the protags two characters are poorly ranked almost exclusively due to how annoying their tutorials are. The mage who would be an expert at ranged combat has to survive a tutorial where you are stuck in enclosed spaces that give little...