God, i know this is supposed to be some kind of epic revenge-reveal whatever, buy I couldn't take it seriously and has been laughing the whole time.
Definitely in the 'so bad, it's good' category. Entertaining enough if you turn off your brain and don't take it seriously.
@Fredthefishlord Definitely a stalker. Change Rei into a guy and I'm not sure if even half of the guys here would be shouting "cute" anymore. It's frankly, quite creepy.
Still, it's better not to take stories like these too seriously.
Keep thinking that the mc's face looks really familiar. Took me awhile to realize that he looks just like the mc from the manhwa Sweet Home.
Anyway, chill and adorable story, not much in term of plot and such though.
Body proportion is a bit fecked up, and the dialogue is cringy at times. I get it, he's explaining things to the readers, but it could be done in a less obvious way.
"I won't be able to gather any crystal point, OR CP, like this."
I mean...who talks like that? Especially not to themselves. He...
@krutou That isn't really my point, but I guess I wasn't being clear enough. I'm having problem with the author using one liners to "develop" his character. He's "telling" and not "showing" the development. If it's going to be like that, an already powerful character will be better.
I have no...
What's the point of having a weak mc if you're going to give him shitload of power ups early on? The struggle was shown for like...what? 1 chapter? Afterward it's all "I ate this, so I got that", "I tried this and that, and now I got this" one liners. Why not just establish that your character...