her face in the mirror on p11 is perfection
also I suspect on p20 it should be just 'that's like' or 'that's just like' or whatever - I assume it's みたい being used, which is not necessarily a visual comparison!
When I was in Japan last year I got to stay at a tiny family-run tea farm in Shizuoka. The people were lovely and the tea was incredible - I just had some this morning, and it's the only tea I drink that makes me just stop and think 'wow, I forgot tea could be this good' every time I drink it...
When I was in a small town in Japan last year (Kanaya, in Shizuoka) I came across a restaurant called 'Louisiana Mama'.
Turns out it was a spaghetti place.