Im starting to gather that this is a story with zero actual conflict. After the inciting incident, everything goes right for the protagonist way too quickly and he gets a perfect outcome while everyone who did him wrong has their whole lives ruined. Cathartic, but not great story writing.
Hm... those spoilers actually annoy me. Revenge is fine and all, but for everything to just happen to line up so perfectly? I would much rather it be more realistic in how the 'revenge' is just him being happy while that Kondo guy and Miyuki just get worse and worse until Miyuki ends up alone.
Blonde tells her to her face that he doesnt give a shit about her and she still chooses him? And then she has to act like she is the victim? Yeah, she is scum, they better not try to redeem this.
I really hate the 'everyone stares' trope cuz it is so bullshit. The reality is that nobody would give a damn. At most a couple glances cuz she is beautiful and her shirt is vacuum sealed to her body, but ultimately nobody would even really notice them.
So the female lead is just an unlikeable, self centered Asshole.
And the protagonist is useless and just has to leave things to them and allow them to sexually harass him.
I dont get why they are so insistent on locking her away from society. It rubs me the wrong way. With that hat, she looks like an ordinary person nobody would look twice at. Isolating her is cruel and unnecessary.
Well then we have to know WHY she cant change it. Because, logically, if she just didnt write, it wouldnt happen. Thus I think 'the visions come true' is because it is a vision she WANTS to come true, and that want leads to her naturally making it happen. She CAN'T change it because she doesnt...