Good work, I am once again looking forwards to what happens next. I only have one critique, and that is the lack of punctuation in some areas of the dialogue. The dialogue itself is fine, but the lack of punctuation in those spots is a bit jarring. Other than that, I'm really interested to see...
looking forwards to seeing what you put out, a hitman in isekai seems cool, but its so much cooler when it it's not constrained by any bullshit publishers or anything
can't wait to see what happens
could've been so good but it's one of those manga....
reading the description i thought
"An interesting story about a man with "instant death" magic, and what consequences that might bear would be so cool!"
but alas, cringe yet again