I think this is another one that works okay as a oneshot but would work so much better fleshed out a little. Not so much that it overstays its welcome, but maybe 15-20 chapters (of around 30-40 pages each) can work.
So I haven't read this in a while and I thought when I saw the update "we probably should have progressed quite a bit now huh???? The leads would be so cute I hope I see cute shit. I should check it out!!!!!" Damn I'm so WRONG I regret even opening the friggin chapter 🫠🫠🫠
It'd be funny if they don't actually end up together by the end (just to fuck with the now overly invested audience haha). Like they'll date for a bit but break up amicably? Anyway, he's a trooper lol, he's not faltering or stuttering at all. How'd he get that much rizz lmao