I don't expect every word to be scrutinised, but...yeah, making sure there are actual sentences and characters' names/pronouns are consistent would be the bare minimum.
Part of me wonders if it's because the sack broke and ruined the "trick". Just because the ringleader wanted to make sure she hadn't looked in the sacks when they first captured her, which seems like an odd thing to ask in that situation.
Letting all the victims go home safely feels a bit too...
Not how I expected the prez to be totally fine, but...sure. Hopefully they go back to that sooner rather than later.
Anyway, it's been a while since they killed their classmates, how many of the band members are gonna die next chapter?
Just because the ringleader wasn't using any tricks doesn't mean the prez didn't come up with one of her own. She spent ages examining how they do this, after all.
Also, nice to see we're getting hints of the yuri the tags mentioned.
Also also, I just noticed this isn't a "part 1"? Although I...
Honestly, I like this kind of outcome. Like...after the previous chapter, I was cynically prepared for her to be revealed as a manipulative psycho because...that seemed to be the pattern they were going with.
Knowing that not every other character is out to kill them means there's actually...
So, there's a tiiiiiiiiny chance that she's actually trying to help and Sakura's getting paranoid because of the previous classmates...and like a 99% chance she just wants Sakura to reach out so she can claim a finger as a trophy/make it clear she's offering them to the specter/etc. in an...