Thanks for the translation! As for the upscaling, I'd have to see more than two pages to form a good opinion, but I'm glad you're fixing the thin line problem. It does seem that there are some contrast problems on all the tweaked versions as compared to the original? The original seems darker...
Thank you so much for continuing to translate this! and about the upscaling, I actually prefer the original because the lines in the upscaled version are too thin. I kept having to zoom in on the farther away facial expressions