it bothers me that they used an off white to clean the text, it is like a couple shades up that is impossible to notice until you realize it and then it bothers you
Man this plot reminds me of Great Epectations; MC is super lucky, has a girl after him, nothing happens the whole time, probably going to F himself over in the last 5 mins.
At first this seemed bad, but the world is starting to take shape. MC isn't a total wimp and at the same time it's not one of those "I'm actually op but i don't want to use my full power because [insert reason]". While there is a literally Deus Ex machina, it is more like the MC is in a video...